英语改错，谢谢啦应该都是语法错误，麻烦大家帮忙给一下，最好给出一点点解释，谢谢啦what do you do on th

Actually, I do a lot of things on the internet. Let mee see, I surf on the internet almost everyday. I like to search about information concerning my major. For example, I am interested in methods of caring for a baby suffering from diarrhea. There are many choice on the internet that I could select from . I also enjoy reading the weather forcast from the internet. It is useful to know about the weather, so I could be prepared when I need an umbrella or not. I don't like to be soaked, it's aweful.
What is better is that I enjoy chatting with my friends on QQ. QQ is a very popular chatting software in China.
Do not start sentence with AND
You have quite a lot of comma splice and run on sentences.

改哪的？