“CATS”,the greatest musical in the world,went to Beijing at


“CATS”,the greatest musical in the world,went to Beijing at last! 1.
As a big fan of the show,I bought a ticket quite early and looking forward 2.
to it for weeks.It was going to be the happiest day of my life,and there 3.
was other performance I had not expected.My mum and I arrived at the 4.
Great Hall of the People ahead of the time,and found our seats on the 5.
second floor.The good designed stage,a huge rubbish dump for cats, 6.
caught the attention the moment I sat down.The show was about to begin 7.
and I was expecting a brilliant musical.So it was said that all the tickets had 8.
sold out long ago,to my surprise nearly a third of the seats were still empty . 9.
But as soon as the music began,its magical power brought my eyes back 10.
to the stage.
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1.把went改成came 
2.把looking改成looked 
3.改and为but 
4.把other改成another 
5.去掉time前的the 
6.good应该换成well 
7.把第一个the改成my 
8.So改成Although 
9.ago改成before 
10.正确。


1.把went改成came 猫剧是国外的,所以说到北京“来”。
2.把looking改成looked 和前面的bought是并列行为。
3.改and为but 根据下文知道该句和前面的分句间是转折关系。
4.把other改成another performance是可数名词,这里指下文说的另一种表现。
5.去掉time前的the ahead of time是固定搭配,意思是:提前。
6.good应该换成well 这里是副词修饰动词的过去分词,该分词作定语。
7.把第一个the改成my catch ones attention是一个习惯搭配,“吸引某人的注意”。
8.So改成Although 该句和下一分句间是转折关系。
9.ago改成before 这里表示的是过去的过去,而ago用于表示现在以前。
10.正确。

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