请问我这样说对吗?/Hello everybody, My name is Gary, I was born in ti

请问我这样说对吗?/
Hello everybody, My name is Gary, I was born in tianjin,
but i study and my life at overseas,I like here,and here the people,so here scenery is beautiful,I hope i have a overseas woman!~
国外人能看懂吗
huojd 1年前 已收到8个回答 举报
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蔚蓝orchid 幼苗

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不是很通顺哦.外国人不会这样写的.(而且要注意标点符号,使用不同符号可以令句子有不同意思哦)
以下是我的意见:
Hello! everybody. My name is Gary. I was born in Tianjing, however I am studying and living in foreign country now, which is a beautiful country. The people here are so nice and I hope I can get a nice lady to become my girlfriend!
这样就比较简单通顺了.

1年前

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zzf_406 幼苗

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but i study and live abroad.I like here,and both people and scenery here is wonderful,I hope i will find a girlfriend or wife of this country.!~

1年前

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云淡风轻888 幼苗

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Hello everybody, my name is Gary. I was born in Tianjin. But I study and live overseas. I like here and the people. So beautiful scenery here is! I hope I could fall in love with a foreign girl.
外国人是可以看懂你写的，但是会被笑话，所以改一改最好

1年前

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Silencehart 幼苗

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Hello everybody,!My name is Gary, I was born in tianjin,
but i live and study abroad!I like here,both the people and thes cenery ,because scenery here is beautiful,I wish i could have foreign wife!~
我想这样应该好点吧

1年前

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雷霆战车 幼苗

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Hello everybody, my name is Gary. I was born in tianjin,
now I'm living and studying overseas. I like this place and the people here. The scenery here is beautiful. I hope I'll have an overseas woman!~
这样流畅一点~

1年前

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sblxk 幼苗

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Hello guys,!My name is Gary, I was born in tianjin,but i study and live abroad.I like here,and both people and scenery here is wonderful,I hope i will find a girlfriend or wife of this country.!~

1年前

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人不能kk到那样 幼苗

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.....嗯......比较驴头不对马嘴,有点好笑.

1年前

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蟹月 幼苗

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基本可以

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