In summer holiday,I went to Guangzhou and did a lot of meani

In summer holiday,I went to Guangzhou and did a lot of meaningful things.
I climbed White Cloud mountain,Evening Cruise and ate a Japanese sushi with my elder sister,It’s funny.
I at Guangzhou book-selling center buy a book of time,saw world champion,Hu jia、Yang jing hui and Lao li shi.It was wonderful.
This summer holiday I learned a lot of things,increased own self-confident,I have a good time!
增添了自信心 怎么说 这篇文章有语法上的错误吗 我10号就要讲了.
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cat12369 幼苗

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I at Guangzhou book-selling center buy a book of time, I bought a book of time at Guangzhou book-selling centerself-confident self-confidenceI have a good time! I had a good time!

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dongbei1983 幼苗

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learned a lot 就OK 不要OFth ..

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xiaohaizq 幼苗

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in改成during比较好
白云山前加the
ate后的a去掉
叮 后面的错误太多 太直译了 建议改下

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521yad 幼苗

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这个是不是有点短? 一分钟不要就讲完了

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