求了大哥大姐们作文训练（一）Topic：在你成长过程中,家（父母、祖父母等）倾注了大量的心血.他们对你的生活和学习除了给
求了大哥大姐们
作文训练（一）Topic：在你成长过程中,家（父母、祖父母等）倾注了大量的心血.他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心、帮助,也会提出一些建议.
请你写一篇短文,向你的好友谈谈你的家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议以及你的想法.
提示：家人在生活起居（饮食,生活习惯）对你的照顾；
对你学习的支持（鼓励,减压等）；
但他们也很严格（会批评,会指出错误…）
注意：这仅给大家一点写作的思路,大家可以发挥自己的想象,写其他方面都可以
要求：1.词数80左右（不包括文中第一句所给的词）；
2.条理清楚,词关,句式规范,字迹工整；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名,校名等相关信息；
Dear Tom,
作文训练（一）Topic：在你成长过程中,家（父母、祖父母等）倾注了大量的心血.他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心、帮助,也会提出一些建议.
请你写一篇短文,向你的好友谈谈你的家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议以及你的想法.
提示：家人在生活起居（饮食,生活习惯）对你的照顾；
对你学习的支持（鼓励,减压等）；
但他们也很严格（会批评,会指出错误…）
注意：这仅给大家一点写作的思路,大家可以发挥自己的想象,写其他方面都可以
要求：1.词数80左右（不包括文中第一句所给的词）；
2.条理清楚,词关,句式规范,字迹工整；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名,校名等相关信息；
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Dear Tom,
I'm growing up and I finally know that my parents love me and take care of me .
I remember when I was third grade , I failed in my Maths exam and I cried when my mother saw my grades.But my mother didn't scold me , she just told me that I should do better and never give up.And soon I got a better score in my test.She said that I shouldn't be too proud of myself because I'll fail again if I do so.
I always eat healthy . My parents believe that diet is an important part of being clever.So they always give me a lot of vegetables and fruits to keep me fit and I have a banana after lunch.
They are great parents and I'll try my best to thank them.
I'm growing up and I finally know that my parents love me and take care of me .
I remember when I was third grade , I failed in my Maths exam and I cried when my mother saw my grades.But my mother didn't scold me , she just told me that I should do better and never give up.And soon I got a better score in my test.She said that I shouldn't be too proud of myself because I'll fail again if I do so.
I always eat healthy . My parents believe that diet is an important part of being clever.So they always give me a lot of vegetables and fruits to keep me fit and I have a banana after lunch.
They are great parents and I'll try my best to thank them.
1年前
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你能帮帮他们吗