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Traffic safety is very important,and we shouldn't turn a blind eye on it,especially people who work as a driver.So if I were a driver,I would obey the traffic rules strictly.First,I shouldn't drive without driving license.Second,I shouldn't cross the red light.Driving after I got drunken is also the thing I mustn't do and,if someone asks me to drink beer,I will refuse decidedly.And what's more,I had better not answer the call and do other things which draw away my concentration during my driving.
In a word,I will treat my work carefully,make sure the passenger's safety.