帮我修改一篇英语短文，谢谢！！Care is a key to everyone's heart. Everybody

帮我修改一篇英语短文，谢谢！！
Care is a key to everyone's heart. Everybody needs love. More care for others isn't a great thing. For example, help a blind man to cross a busy road. It is very ordinary, isn’t it? A casual care, make my whole life warm. One day, l was on my way home. l always go back home by bus. My school is far away from my house, but the bus station is just three minutes away from my school. Unluckily, when l got on the bus, l found that l haven’t got any money to buy the tickets. A man in white gave me some money and said with smile, ‘Don’t forget to take money next time.’ I nodded and smile, l felt very happy.As the saying goes,’ the roses in her hand, the flavor in mine. Please take more care for others!