纠正错误,讲下原因I meet a friend,He was awful yesterday,he sometimes

更正：I met 【过去式】a friend,He was 【过去式】awful yesterday（昨天）,He sometimes【有时,用于一般现在时,三单go+es】 goes to shanghai,He often does not go【缺少动词go】 home,either【否定句,用either,肯定句用too】,His 【he,作主语用,his他的,作定语用】child was crying at home【语序调整】,the child said【过去式】 it was bad.

I met a friend. 过去式
He was awful yesterday. 没错
He sometimes goes to Shanghai.没错
He doesn't go home often. 缺动词go
His child was crying at home yesterday.他的孩子his child.估计你是电脑字典翻译的
The child said that it was bad.没什么错误。
注意大小写