英语短文改错（下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词）
英语短文改错（下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词）
After I finished my school,I began to look for a job. Now several months had passed, and I haven't found the job I'm interested. Last Sunday morning, I received a phone call from a man naming Mr.Wang. He said on the phone, “ I hear you do well on your studies. I may offer you a job.”I entered into his office with a beating heart. How I wished I will go through the job-hunting talk and that he would take on me as a lab assistant. And to my surprised, what he said made me feel disappointed.That he needed was only a model.
After I finished my school,I began to look for a job. Now several months had passed, and I haven't found the job I'm interested. Last Sunday morning, I received a phone call from a man naming Mr.Wang. He said on the phone, “ I hear you do well on your studies. I may offer you a job.”I entered into his office with a beating heart. How I wished I will go through the job-hunting talk and that he would take on me as a lab assistant. And to my surprised, what he said made me feel disappointed.That he needed was only a model.
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1 After I finished my school 去掉my
2 Now several months had passed, and I haven't found the job I'm interested.
had 改为 have
3 and 改为 yet
4 改为 I'm interested in
5 I received a phone call from a man naming Mr.Wang.
改为 named
6 I hear you do well on your studies.
改为 do well in
7 I entered into his office with a beating heart.
去掉 into
8 job-hunting talk 改为 job interview
9 And to my surprised
And 改为 But
10 That he needed was only a model.
that 改为 what
我毕业后就开始找工作了,但找了几个月都找不到我感兴趣的工作.上个星期天早上,我接到一位王先生的电话,他在电话里说“我听说您的学习很好,我可以给你一份工作”.带着紧张的心情我来到了他的办公室.我多么希望可以通过这次面试啊, 然后我就可以成为一名实验室助理.后来我真的感到很惊讶也很失望,因为他需要的仅仅是一个模特儿.
2 Now several months had passed, and I haven't found the job I'm interested.
had 改为 have
3 and 改为 yet
4 改为 I'm interested in
5 I received a phone call from a man naming Mr.Wang.
改为 named
6 I hear you do well on your studies.
改为 do well in
7 I entered into his office with a beating heart.
去掉 into
8 job-hunting talk 改为 job interview
9 And to my surprised
And 改为 But
10 That he needed was only a model.
that 改为 what
我毕业后就开始找工作了,但找了几个月都找不到我感兴趣的工作.上个星期天早上,我接到一位王先生的电话,他在电话里说“我听说您的学习很好,我可以给你一份工作”.带着紧张的心情我来到了他的办公室.我多么希望可以通过这次面试啊, 然后我就可以成为一名实验室助理.后来我真的感到很惊讶也很失望,因为他需要的仅仅是一个模特儿.
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去掉my had- have and-yet naming-named on-in into去掉 will-would that-than and-but that-what
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