各位英语的学霸，能帮忙改一下下列英语语法的错误吗？大约二百多字。谢谢！

各位英语的学霸，能帮忙改一下下列英语语法的错误吗？大约二百多字。谢谢！
During transport, it is very important to a reasonable cushion packaging，Can effectively protect our articles，In order to better protect the goods fromdamage, the need for better cushioning packaging design，For example, types of goods isnot at the same time, we must chooseappropriate cushioning material；
This paper is on thestudy of PVC inflatable protective pad on the hard disk，PVCinflatable cushion as a cushion, to protect objects made of hard disk memorypackage，The packageis the impact experiment, the vibration transmissibility testand sweep vibration test，Throughthe analysis of experimental data，Understand their inflatable cushionto protect the hard disk storage performance，Based on these performancecharacteristics can better grasp precautions during transport, as well asselecting the best mode of transport, the transport buffer for small householdappliances packaging options to provide a reference.
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