能帮我改下这篇英文短文吗?Hello Now let me tell you something about my to
能帮我改下这篇英文短文吗?
Hello
Now let me tell you something about my today’s life ,which is full of tired and exhausted.
Today I moved to a new lab .I put away my books ,in addition,I cleaned the house without cease from day to night.With the advent of my new fellows,I kept on introducing myself to them.
My new lab has accommodations for 10 persons,however ,there are only 4 people in this new lab.Through our four people’s work hard,this dirty room has changed into a new one .I have had a new environment to study.
If you are willing to a good listener ,I would tell you some stories about my former love in the next email.It is a mournful story.
By the way,I still can not log in the Messenger of new version,in addition,I also don’t know the true reason.
Thank you for the answers about Olympic games.
If you own a Gmail’s mail box ,you can log in the Google talk,which is a perfect instant communication software.You can have my Google talk’s account:
So long!
Jerry.C
A pop music is included as enclosure in this email.
Hello
Now let me tell you something about my today’s life ,which is full of tired and exhausted.
Today I moved to a new lab .I put away my books ,in addition,I cleaned the house without cease from day to night.With the advent of my new fellows,I kept on introducing myself to them.
My new lab has accommodations for 10 persons,however ,there are only 4 people in this new lab.Through our four people’s work hard,this dirty room has changed into a new one .I have had a new environment to study.
If you are willing to a good listener ,I would tell you some stories about my former love in the next email.It is a mournful story.
By the way,I still can not log in the Messenger of new version,in addition,I also don’t know the true reason.
Thank you for the answers about Olympic games.
If you own a Gmail’s mail box ,you can log in the Google talk,which is a perfect instant communication software.You can have my Google talk’s account:
So long!
Jerry.C
A pop music is included as enclosure in this email.
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Dear xxx,
i will be very appreciative if you would like to spare some time to look through what is going on on me today.
Today i am tired and exhausted.I moved to a new dormitory.After i put away my books,i began cleaning the room without cease.With the advent of my new fellows,I kept on introducing myself to them.
My new dormitory has an accommodation of 10 people,but there will be only 4 people living in this dorm.Through our hardwork,the dorm had shown on a new face and we had a new environment to study.
If you are a patient listener,i would tell you something about my former love in the next email.It is a mournful story.
By the way,i really do not know why i still can not log in the Messenger(new version).
Thanks for your answers on the Olympics.
If you own a gmail,you can download a google talk,which is a perfect prompt communication software.You can have my google talk account:
So long!
yours sincerely,(B.W;B.R;etc,as you like.)这里英文信件最好有个问候语.
Jerry.C
A pop music is included as enclosure in this email.
i will be very appreciative if you would like to spare some time to look through what is going on on me today.
Today i am tired and exhausted.I moved to a new dormitory.After i put away my books,i began cleaning the room without cease.With the advent of my new fellows,I kept on introducing myself to them.
My new dormitory has an accommodation of 10 people,but there will be only 4 people living in this dorm.Through our hardwork,the dorm had shown on a new face and we had a new environment to study.
If you are a patient listener,i would tell you something about my former love in the next email.It is a mournful story.
By the way,i really do not know why i still can not log in the Messenger(new version).
Thanks for your answers on the Olympics.
If you own a gmail,you can download a google talk,which is a perfect prompt communication software.You can have my google talk account:
So long!
yours sincerely,(B.W;B.R;etc,as you like.)这里英文信件最好有个问候语.
Jerry.C
A pop music is included as enclosure in this email.
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