帮我修改一下英语小作文!As can be seen from the cartoon,nowadays student

As can be seen from the cartoon,nowadays students have endless homework to do(删除to do 更简洁) every day,and teachers the same have endless homework to mark（重新开始一个新句子：As a result,teachers have the same huge amount of homework to mark）.The ( this)situation is obvious(quite common) in the stage from primary school to senior high school(This situation is quite common in primary school,middle school and high school).In the stage,most of sudents are minors and too much homework makes them burden heavily(Students from primary school to high school are only minors.This overwhelming amount of work impacts their life heavily.).Students’interest is （Their interests are）ignored by teachers and their parents(their teachers and parents).The current education system is not aimd at students’ quality(bringing up higher quality education to students),but only at developing their ability to perform well on the tests.A student could enter a good unversity or not accoding to his scores entirely(Whether a student could enter a good univeristy or not is entirely decided by their test scores).The deficiencies of the current education system are very clear,but the system has a strongpoint(an undeniable strength)—justice,maximum justice.We are all worried about interference with our rights of educated(education?the educated?).There are many elements of the interference,for example,money,a power(删除a),status (social status)and so on.In sum,although the current education system has some deficiencies,we should be keep it before find a better way(before a better way is found).

真是不好意思打击你，我个人觉得你的这个小作文没得可改的，还是重写一下吧。

As can be seen from the cartoon, everyday CURRENT students have TO DO endless AMOUNT OF homework and teachers HAVE TO MARK THE same endless AMOUNT OF homework. THIS situation is EVIDENT THROUGHOUT THE...

写的不错，就这样吧。

As (it) can be seen from the cartoon, nowadays (the) students have endless homework(删除 to do )every day, and （the） teachers (删the same) have endless homework to mark. The （situation换成phenomenon好点) is ...