急.今晚之前.根据中文提示,写一篇英语日记,时间是10月12日,星期五.内容如下:
急.今晚之前.根据中文提示,写一篇英语日记,时间是10月12日,星期五.内容如下:
1.今天是你生日.下午5点许多小朋友来你家.
2.他们给了你许多礼物.你们开了一个生日派对.你们吃了一个又大又美味的蛋糕,唱了歌,跳了舞,玩了一个很有趣的游戏,你们玩得很开心.
1.今天是你生日.下午5点许多小朋友来你家.
2.他们给了你许多礼物.你们开了一个生日派对.你们吃了一个又大又美味的蛋糕,唱了歌,跳了舞,玩了一个很有趣的游戏,你们玩得很开心.
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Today was my birthday, I had a birthday party at home. Lots of my friends came to my house around 5 pm and gave me many presents. During that time, we ate a yummy big cake and sing, dancing in my room. Today, we had lots of fun!
今天是我的生日,我在家举办了一个生日派对.我的朋友在5点左右来到了我家并且给了我许多礼物.在那期间,我们吃了一个美味的大蛋糕,在我的房间里唱歌跳舞.今天,我们过得很愉快!
Today was my birthday, I had a birthday party at home. Lots of my friends came to my house around 5 pm and gave me many presents. During that time, we ate a yummy big cake and sing, dancing in my room. Today, we had lots of fun!
今天是我的生日,我在家举办了一个生日派对.我的朋友在5点左右来到了我家并且给了我许多礼物.在那期间,我们吃了一个美味的大蛋糕,在我的房间里唱歌跳舞.今天,我们过得很愉快!
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