帮我改一下这篇初中英语文章（明天早上截止）

帮你修改如下:
During this period, I have learnt a lot.
Actually, everything is unforgettable, especially Rumbert's conscientiousness, Bradon's sense of humor, Fatima's kindness. I have learnt a lot from the daily talk of Fatima's lesson. Not only the knowledge itself but also some important philosophic theories. I really want to say---thanks a million, Mr Balinge.
简要说明,表达某某人的尽责,应该用名词形式,所以帮你改过来了.因为你想夸的其实是Bradon的幽默感,所以帮你改成了sense of humor,形容某某人亲切友好一般用kindness.哲理是philosophic theory, philosophy一般是指哲学.后面是一些形式上的小变化,希望你喜欢.

你好，
可以，注意标点，在Fatima's lesson后面不是句话是逗号。还有可以把感谢放在前面，突出主题。
First of all, I'd like to present my sincere appreciation to Balinge. During my stay at school, I have learnt more than I have expected...

I have learnt a lot this term. Actually, everything is unforgettable. Especially the conscientious of Rumbert, the humor of Bradon and the friendly of Fatima. I have learnt a lot from the daily talk in Fatima's lesson. Not only the knowledge but also some philosophy. I really want to say thank you to Balinge.

I have learnt a lot during this period.Everything is really unforgettable,especially the conscientiousness of Rumbert, the humor of Bradonand the kindness of Fatima. I have learnt a lot from the daily talk of Fatima's lesson,not only the knowledge but some philosophic theories as well. Much appreciate,Mr Balinge!

During this term ,I have learnt a lot of knowledge