第三篇日记可以帮我修改下吗june 7th saturday cloudy Today is saturday ,so
第三篇日记可以帮我修改下吗
june 7th saturday cloudy
Today is saturday ,so excting ,beacuse weekday studyed very exhausted ,i want have a rest ,but also have too much work need do ,like speak up new word ,and new passage of the new concept ,untill now i didn't finish it ,i need do it fast .
june 7th saturday cloudy
Today is saturday ,so excting ,beacuse weekday studyed very exhausted ,i want have a rest ,but also have too much work need do ,like speak up new word ,and new passage of the new concept ,untill now i didn't finish it ,i need do it fast .
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你好这位朋友,你的日记修改如下：
June 7th Saturday Cloudy
Today is Saturday and it's a very excting day for me,because during weekdays my heavy study load has already made me extremely exhausted but today I finally get some to have a rest.However at the same time I realize that I also have too much work that I need to do.For instance,I need to learn how to pronounce new words,master recently introduced concepts in class,etc.Untill this moment I still haven't finished these yet hence I need to nail them fast!
有不懂的地方就开口哈~日记愉快 :-)
June 7th Saturday Cloudy
Today is Saturday and it's a very excting day for me,because during weekdays my heavy study load has already made me extremely exhausted but today I finally get some to have a rest.However at the same time I realize that I also have too much work that I need to do.For instance,I need to learn how to pronounce new words,master recently introduced concepts in class,etc.Untill this moment I still haven't finished these yet hence I need to nail them fast!
有不懂的地方就开口哈~日记愉快 :-)
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