麻烦帮我看看这段话的语法错误!我们老师说有语法表达错误.但这段话是摘抄自英文网站上的.
麻烦帮我看看这段话的语法错误!我们老师说有语法表达错误.但这段话是摘抄自英文网站上的.
In order to realized these results Zara developed a business model that incorporated the following three goals for operations:develop a system the requires short lead times,decrease quantities produced to decrease inventory risk,and increase the number of available styles and/or choice.
为了达到这一结果,Zara创立了包含以下3个目标的商业模式:建立一个交货期短的系统,减少产量以减少库存风险,增加风格和选择.
实在抱歉,我现在也没有钱了.所以不能提供悬赏币
表示语法错误点是在 develop a system the requires short lead times,decrease quantities produced to decrease inventory risk 这句中.但我没有看出来,老师说有两个否定词,多余了.而且表达意思不明确.