英文自我介绍修改RT,自我介绍如下：I'm excited to have the new oriental.My na

英文自我介绍修改
RT,自我介绍如下：
I'm excited to have the new oriental.My name is XXX.I was from Shi Yan Er Zhong.I am a boy and sometimes I am very reticence.Irarely obey others,I do my own.Draw pictures,swim and play the guitar is my points and hobbys.Recite the lesson is my pet aversion .I'm being the new guy here,and if I do make a mistake ,please for giveme.Forthe future of the study ,kindly give us your advice please.
请大家帮忙看看有没有什么语法或者单词上的错误啊!