英语好的兄弟帮我看看我作文``谢谢
英语好的兄弟帮我看看我作文``谢谢
文章:
l want to get good mark in this term.l know it is not very easy.
But l will be hard working.Now wo are in Grade3,we will graduate
from our school next year.This year like a battle,a battle which we can`t lose.So l will try my best to win the game.
l believe l can win the game.
What l have said today,
what l will do in the future.
有语法问题的话帮忙改下,提点意见也好``我会给分的
文章:
l want to get good mark in this term.l know it is not very easy.
But l will be hard working.Now wo are in Grade3,we will graduate
from our school next year.This year like a battle,a battle which we can`t lose.So l will try my best to win the game.
l believe l can win the game.
What l have said today,
what l will do in the future.
有语法问题的话帮忙改下,提点意见也好``我会给分的
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But l will be hard working.这一句不是很好,可以改为"I will be more hard working".更好.
Now wo are in Grade3,we will graduate .是we
win the game.既然你前面都说了battle,怎么又改成game 了呢?还是用战争比较好.
其他的还行,就是多加几句复合句会更好吧.
Now wo are in Grade3,we will graduate .是we
win the game.既然你前面都说了battle,怎么又改成game 了呢?还是用战争比较好.
其他的还行,就是多加几句复合句会更好吧.
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