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第一段：提出现象,引出焦点问题
第二段：对问题的两种不同看法
第三段：给出自己的观点：赞成大学校园对外开放
Nowadays ,many famous university campuses have become popular tourism spots. Every year thousand of middle students and their parents visit these famous universities such as Tsinghua University and Peking University .
People have different opinions about this phenomenon .On the one hand,some people believe that visiting famous universities can bring helpful information to middle school school students to strengthen their resolution.On the other hand ,some people hold that tourism is posing a challenge to the intellectual atmosphere in the university.
In my opinion ,the tourism to campuses is not a bad thing.Enrolling in a famous university is a dream for every student.Getting access to a place they dream about can be a big thrill and encouragement to them .Plus,people ussally visit the campus during vacations ,and this is not a threat to intellectual atmophere there.
第二段：对问题的两种不同看法
第三段：给出自己的观点：赞成大学校园对外开放
Nowadays ,many famous university campuses have become popular tourism spots. Every year thousand of middle students and their parents visit these famous universities such as Tsinghua University and Peking University .
People have different opinions about this phenomenon .On the one hand,some people believe that visiting famous universities can bring helpful information to middle school school students to strengthen their resolution.On the other hand ,some people hold that tourism is posing a challenge to the intellectual atmosphere in the university.
In my opinion ,the tourism to campuses is not a bad thing.Enrolling in a famous university is a dream for every student.Getting access to a place they dream about can be a big thrill and encouragement to them .Plus,people ussally visit the campus during vacations ,and this is not a threat to intellectual atmophere there.
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你能帮帮他们吗