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请求哪位高人可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文!题材是是一篇article 写给一本杂志,然后推销自己的.
Bold and Beautiful
(Local fashion designer and clothes shop owner Elise Lau shares her thoughts on the latest fashion trends in Hong Kong)
Giorgio Armani once said,the difference between the style and the fashion is quality.That's why our aim is to provide the latest fashion with the highest quality.
This autumn,the latest fashion trend in Hong Kong is focusing on being bold and beautiful.The features that we will see in this season are bold print,eg floral prints and stripes,and beautiful colours,eg peach and pink.
My shop - Belise Fashion designed to follow these trends in our autumn collection and it is now available now.Moreover,our autumn collection features original,quality clothes with a surprising low prices.
It is absolutely beneficial to come to Belise Fahion for latest trends at best price.Action now!