It's harm to our health if people eat too many hamburgers.Be
It's harm to our health if people eat too many hamburgers.Because its high fat and calorie.The chips are produced by frying.They are easy to make people get fatter.And the ice cream is so cold and sweet,that cause the stomach problem.
Jim was die in 2004 by heart disease.Although doctor didn't prove necessary connection with his die and hamburgers.The company admitted they ate a lot of hamburgers.
An organization to point out chips have Acrylamide which will make people get cancer.
An other research found out that the hamburger meat have one kind of hormone will make men grow breasts like women.
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Jim was die in 2004 by heart disease.Although doctor didn't prove necessary connection with his die and hamburgers.The company admitted they ate a lot of hamburgers.
An organization to point out chips have Acrylamide which will make people get cancer.
An other research found out that the hamburger meat have one kind of hormone will make men grow breasts like women.
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It's harm to our health if people eat too many hamburgers,because of its high fat and calorie.
And the ice cream is so cold and sweet, which will cause stomach problems.
Jim died of heart disease in 2004. Although doctor didn't prove necessary connection between his die and eating hamburgers.
An organization pointed out that chips contain Acrylamide which will make people get cancer.
Another research found out that the hamburger meat contains one kind of hormone, which will make men grow breasts like women.
这样能好点
And the ice cream is so cold and sweet, which will cause stomach problems.
Jim died of heart disease in 2004. Although doctor didn't prove necessary connection between his die and eating hamburgers.
An organization pointed out that chips contain Acrylamide which will make people get cancer.
Another research found out that the hamburger meat contains one kind of hormone, which will make men grow breasts like women.
这样能好点
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