英语翻译大学英语第一册教科书中的翻译我上大学之前,祖父对我说的那几句充满智慧的话给我留下了深刻印象Before I we

英语翻译
大学英语第一册教科书中的翻译
我上大学之前,祖父对我说的那几句充满智慧的话给我留下了深刻印象
Before I went off to the university,my grandfather gave me a few words of wisdom which impressed me deeply.
但是按照中文语序的话,不应该是（我翻译的）
Before I went off to the university,a few words of wisdom which was given by my grandfather impressed me deeply.
我觉得答案强调点好像有问题
请问这样的语序更改是好是坏?（是不是我翻译的有些Chinglish?）