假如你是李华。 请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点: 1. 做

假如你是李华。 请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点: 1. 做
假如你是李华。 请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点:
1. 做家务的理由;2. 做家务的过程;3. 你的感受。、
注意:1. 短文字数不少于100;
2. 开头部分已经写好,不计入总次数;
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称
I am an 18-year-old middle school student. ____________________________________

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I’m an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I would see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.


试题分析:考查提纲类作文写作,重点考查考生的书面表达的能力。做家务的话题应该是中学生熟悉,有话可写的素材,因此难度并不大。题目以周记的形式展现,要求考生先介绍做家务的理由,再介绍做家务的过程,最后写出自己的感受。考生在写作时,一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作,三个要点都十分重要,如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上,抓住语言的准确性,再写出几个亮点词汇和句式,得到高分应该比较轻松。
【亮点说明】Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.这句话是现在分词做状语, Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? 这句话用了同位语从句, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 这句话里面用了词组:put sth in place把…布置得井井有条, Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 这句话用了倒装句,还有文章用了Firstly, After that这样的词使文章更加连贯。

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