这句英文有没有错误1908年,诺斯克利夫勋爵拿出1,000英镑,作为对第一个飞越英吉利海峡的人的奖励.然而一年多过去了才

首先,年份应该加In
拿出不应字面理解,用offer较合适
prize such people 这句中prize是名词,不能作动词
“第一个飞越英吉利海峡的人”翻译有误,应该是：the first person flying over the English Channel
一年多过去了才有人出来尝试until one more year passed,a man would to try
这句应该用not...until词组,不能逐字翻译；另外如果用would的话,因为would是情态动词,后面要跟动词原形,所以不能加to
综上,重新组织一下：
In 1908,Lord Northcliffe offered 1000 pounds to the first man who would be the first to fly over the English Channel as an award.However,nobody tried until a year later.
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would like to try.
整体比较勉强.

In 1908，Lord Northcliffe took 1000 pounds as a prize to th first person who flew over the English channel . However, one more year later ,a man would like an attempt .

错误还是挺多的，明显机器式翻译，1908年好歹前面加个In固定搭配，prize一般用作名词，做动词
的时候是珍惜，珍重的意思。first 应该紧接people否则影响连贯性，一般不用such,用those
或者the 修饰people ,man,而man 和 person就是普通的人, people则是person的复数形式
man不仅可以表达为男人,也可以用来表达人,不...