帮我查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误的

帮我查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误的
Get Ready For Deams
Many people have many dreams.Some people are want to be a doctor.Some people are want to be a policeman.Some people are want to be an actor or an actress.Do you have good dreams?If you have dreams,you should get ready for dreams.
First,you can do some things about your dreams.For example,a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he can learn math well.Second,you should learn and read about your dreams.It can increase knowledge.Lastly,you must have to work hard for your dreams.
A German philosopher said,"If you would go up high,then use your own two legs."So you will hard for your dreams will come true.
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sznan 幼苗

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Some people are want to be a doctor 这里不能用are,应改为Some people want to be a doctor 后面1句也是这样改if a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he should learn math wellyou should learn and read abo...

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最后一句更改为So after your efforts, will be realized dreams.可以吗?

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还是不可以额 木有主语额 可以改为after making efforts ,you will realiaze your dream

xiaopianzi54 幼苗

共回答了17个问题采纳率:82.4% 举报

are want to be ;,a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he can learn math well.这几个地方错了

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brhappy 幼苗

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第二句some people want to be(删掉are)。第三句、第四句同理删掉are。第一段最后的dreams可以改为them,不会显得太重复。
第一句can改为should,语气更强烈,some things 改为something,about改为for。one day可以删掉或者改为in the future,can改为should。read后加something。it wi...

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家有陋室 幼苗

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首先,写得不错,有一些小语法错误。以下是改正过的
有些疑问,什么叫you should learn and read about your dreams? 你应该学和读你的梦想?
Get Ready For Deams
Many people have many dreams.Some people want to be doctors.Some people wa...

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13082645676 幼苗

共回答了20个问题采纳率:75% 举报

Get Ready For Dreams
Many people have many dreams.Some people want to be a doctor.Some people want to be a policeman.Some people want to be an actor or an actress.Do you have good dreams?If yo...

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