短文改错when I first learned to write in English，I into many 1__
短文改错
when I first learned to write in English，I into many 1___
difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought 2___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 3___
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her 4___
davice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 5___
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was 6___
learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a 7___
little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8___
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9___
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me. 10___
每一行都有一个错误
when I first learned to write in English，I into many 1___
difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought 2___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 3___
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her 4___
davice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 5___
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was 6___
learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a 7___
little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8___
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9___
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me. 10___
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1、I into many 应该改为I fell into many,缺少谓语
2、was in that 的in去掉
3、 translate anything into 中的anything改为everything，在陈述句中用everyting不用anything
4、keep my diary 可以改为keep whriting，“坚持写”
5、and should put 的should去掉
6、enjoy talk to 的talk改为talking，enjoy加ing形式。
7、express me in simple 的me改为myself。意为：我自己
8、showed to my 中showed加宾语it
9、and reads it 中的reads改为read，因为是过去时态，and连接两个相同的成分。
10、Their word were 的word改为words，与后面的were相应。
2、was in that 的in去掉
3、 translate anything into 中的anything改为everything，在陈述句中用everyting不用anything
4、keep my diary 可以改为keep whriting，“坚持写”
5、and should put 的should去掉
6、enjoy talk to 的talk改为talking，enjoy加ing形式。
7、express me in simple 的me改为myself。意为：我自己
8、showed to my 中showed加宾语it
9、and reads it 中的reads改为read，因为是过去时态，and连接两个相同的成分。
10、Their word were 的word改为words，与后面的were相应。
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