帮我看一下有没有语法错误.For me the Blue Sky park is the place I go to o

The Blue Sky park is the place I often go to, and that is important for me.
It only takes me about ten minutes to get there on foot. And it opens to visitor for free, so I can go there anytime.
There are a couple of reasons which I love to go there. Firstly, this park is more beautiful than other general parks. So I'd love to draw the beautiful landscape in my sketch book.
In addition, if I start getting dizzy with painting,I can run near the river in the fresh air.It really brings me comfortable as much as sketching.
In a nutshell,the Blue Sky park is the place I visit frequently and it is very important for me in my daily life.

For me, the Blue Sky Park is the place that I go to often and is very important to me.
And it is open to vistors for free...
First, this park has really wonderful scenery compared to other com...