英语改错,正确率要高,Li Yue was awarding the title of “Star Student of

因为不确定一共有几处错,所以有的不太正确但可以接受的用法我用/表示.Li Yue was awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” because of what she did/had done for our class.On the hot afternoon of last Saturday,Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another,looking for the clothes we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool rooms,she was spending the whole afternoon searching for the right clothes.Deeply moved by her,we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class.Besides,she often devotes her spare time to helping others.She has set a good example to/for us.

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.was awarding 改成awarded
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.one store to other 改成 to another
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.won first prize变won the first prize
.and care改成and she cares
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