英语文章,高手帮忙看看有没有错误,很重要,加分
英语文章,高手帮忙看看有没有错误,很重要,加分
求求了,万分感谢,只要看看有没有错就好,有的话指出来,告诉我正确的,谢谢了.
In the winter holiday, I am very happy, because I play some fireworks.
In the Lunar December 30, I go to buy some firework with my father.
At the beginning, I am very timid. I dare not to do. Then I'm brave. I can do it alone. .
Fireworks are very beautiful. They are red, green and yellow. They like in full bloom chrysanthemums, like the stars, like the petals fell down.
I like them.