上个星期六你们班去郊游(go hiking).请你描述当时的情景和你们的心情.字数不少于30个单词

静水漂瓶 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

candy060112 幼苗

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Last saterday ,our class went hiking together.and this is very interesting,I think I will never forget it.
on the way,we are all very happy,some people were talking something,some people were catching some animals,others were singing a song .At noon ,we had lunch together .Exciting and interesting,dark
was coming,we had to go home last.

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lxfcharlie 幼苗

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下面写的很好。是Saturday。我觉得把i think 去掉吧 。a song 改为songs。最后一句改为Dark was coming,we had to go homein a cheerful mood
last. 把Exciting and interesting去掉吧
希望楼上仁兄莫介意!

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