英语短文改错About three year ago,I wrote a small poem in a beaueif

　　About three year ago,I wrote a small poem in a beaueiful (拼错) notebook in memory of my happy childhood. It（指代不清,笔记本还是诗呢?）was missing for ( 漏词) long time. But luckily, in my winter holiday when I was cleaning my room I find it at the bottom of（ 用错） a lot of books. I was so exciting（用错） that I read it again and again and finally decided to translate it into English one（多余) .I hope my poem will help you thinking of （中式用法) the wonderful time in your childhood. It's believing（用错) that happy childhood memories play an important role in one's future life and is of importance.（重复)
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About three years ago, I wrote a small poem in memory of my happy chilhood in a beautiful notebook. But the notebook has been nowhere to be found for a long time, luckily I found it under a lot of books when I was cleaning my room this winter holiday. I was so excited to find the poem again. Reading the poem again and again, I found it full of happy memories in my childhood so I decided to translate it into English. It is believed that my poem will remind you of your memories because a happy childhood play an important role in everyone's future life.

1.year 加s 应该是复数：3年。
2. exceting 应该是 exceted 因为主语是人，表示情绪的

再综合楼上的 应该差不多了

About three year ago，I wrote a small poem in a beaueiful (beautiful 拼写错) notebook in memory of my happy childhood. It was missing for (a 漏词) long time. But luckily, in my winter holiday when I was cle...