短文改错 When I was a child,my mom was pushed me to study hard,h
短文改错 When I was a child,my mom was pushed me to study hard,hoping I could
When I was a child,my mom was pushed me to study hard,hoping I could get a chance to go to college.I experience pressure for the first time.I did that my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off.I was born to a poor peasant family,but I really knew life was not easy.All the things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could lead better life in the future.As the saying go,“No pains,no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and have a chance to go to college.Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure,I made it.Now,I no longer think pressure is a good thing.
When I was a child,my mom was pushed me to study hard,hoping I could get a chance to go to college.I experience pressure for the first time.I did that my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off.I was born to a poor peasant family,but I really knew life was not easy.All the things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could lead better life in the future.As the saying go,“No pains,no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and have a chance to go to college.Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure,I made it.Now,I no longer think pressure is a good thing.
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When I was a child,my mom was （此处was去掉）pushed me to study hard,hoping I could get a chance to go to college.I experience(此处应用过去式+d) pressure for the first time.I did that (what)my mom expected because I didn’t want to let her off(down;let sb.down让某人失落).I was born to（in） a poor peasant family,but （改为so,此处的逻辑关系应该为顺承而非转折）I really knew life was not easy.All the things my mother did was(were此处应该为复数) the result of her hope that I could lead （加a）better life in the future.As the saying go(goes),“No pains,no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother（mother's） expectations and have a chance to go to college.Thanks to my mother’s push and the pressure,I made it.Now,I no longer think pressure is a good(此处是bad) thing.
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