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Now we are doing promotions, and xxx's performance is better than the one that you are using, what is more, there is now no difference between the price of xxx. Try on the xxx before you buy them.
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Now we are doing promotions, xxx's performance is better than the one that you are using's, what is more, there is now no difference between the price . you buy them before that you can try it . 这样说才是对的
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1. 第一个逗号后的and这个连词不可省略 2.建议你price后面不要删,between the price 后面不加东西有点怪怪的,而且指代就不明了了 3.you buy them before that you can try it,before的意思是“在……之前”,这里的before前后明显反了