各位英语好的亲,帮忙看看这篇作文有什么语法上是不足没?

楼主,好像语法错误有点多,我具体罗列如下,供你参考,
第一行:because use English 改为 :Because using English ,这里是现在分词作主语,不能用原形
teach 改为 :teaches 表示"用英语" 这一件事 ,谓语用三单形式
are good at 改为 :to be good at 因为 ,teache sb to do sth 是固定用法.
improve改为 :improving 因为 ,be good at doing sth "擅长做某事"
第二行 :students use English communicate 改为 :students' English skills to communicate .
teach 改为 :teaches
look as if everday`s English training.改为:to practise English everyday.(这一句的
语法错误太多了,我就直接改了)
第五行 :thought 改为 :thoughts thought 是可数名词,要用复数形式.

第二句最好改为Because teaching students in English can motivate students to communicate in English.
第三句没明白你要表达的意思。
最后When you teach students in English, you can add some Chinese.

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I think you`d better use English的better后加to
To use English teach students 的To改成Our
a few of Chinese...