求英语作文一篇.有翻译中文再给20分

I am proud of my hometown
我为自己的故乡上海而自豪,它是我国最大的城市之一.位于中国的东部.东方明珠电视塔是上海的象征.还有金茂大厦.它们都是名满世界的.近几年我的家乡已经发生了巨大的变化,.不少高层住宅建在上海的中心.道路拓宽了.这些大的变化,表明上海人的智慧.你是我的骄傲,上海.
I’m proud of my hometown, Shanghai, one of the biggest cities in China. Shanghai is located in the east of China. The Oriental Pearl TV Tower is the symbol of Shanghai. So is Jinmao Building. They are both well-known throughout the world. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. Many highrises have been built in the center of Shanghai. Roads are also widened. The projects on changes show the wisdom of Shanghai people. I’m proud of you, Shanghai.
I’m proud of my mother我为我的母亲而自豪
Among the greatest people, I’m proud of my mother. Although she is an ordinary person, what she did is so great that I’m proud of her. She works hard, not only at the work place, but also at home. But she never says how tired she is. Instead she keeps her smile on her face. She is also strict with my study. She always encourages me to study harder. She is a great mum. I love her!
在所有最伟大的人中,我为我的母亲而自豪.虽然她是个平凡的人,她如此的伟大,我为她感到骄傲.她工作努力,无论是在工作中,还是在家里.她从不说她是多么辛苦.在她脸上只有微笑.她对我要求严格.总是鼓励我更加努力学习.她是一个伟大的妈妈.我爱她!