帮忙找出语法错误吧,Good Morning I know you are very busy ,I am sorry

帮忙找出语法错误吧,
Good Morning
I know you are very busy ,I am sorry for botherring you again .
I only want to know what is your opinions about our items ,any of your suggestion will be welcome in our company .
If these items can not satisfied you ,please do not hesitate to tell me .
Thanks for taking you time to read my Email .
Have a nice day & good luck
destiny001 1年前 已收到6个回答 举报

想算个命01 幼苗

共回答了19个问题采纳率:89.5% 举报

1.I am sorry to bother you again.
2.I only want to know waht your opinions about our items are.
3.Your suggestions will be welcomed in our company.
4.satisfied----satisfy
5.Thank you for reading my email.
错误太多了.

1年前

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牵挂你 幼苗

共回答了1个问题 举报

"what is your opinions"应改为what is your opinion;
应是suggestions

1年前

2

hjhespn 幼苗

共回答了86个问题 举报

botherring拼写错误,bothering
去掉what is
be welcome 加ed
satisfied改为satisfy

1年前

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狗剩gousheng 幼苗

共回答了58个问题 举报

1.botherring 应改为bothering
2.what is 应改为 what are
3.suggestion 应改为 sugestions
4.in our company 应改为 by our company
5.satisfied 应改为 satisfy
6.you time 应改为 your time
7. 在 I am sorry 之前加上but能使你的文章语气显得更有礼貌。

1年前

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丫咪 幼苗

共回答了200个问题 举报

botherring拼写错误,应该为bothering
satisfied改为satisfy
Thanks for taking you time to read my Email改为Thank you for reading my mail或者直接说Thank you即可

1年前

2

丁香烟 幼苗

共回答了2个问题 举报

把Thanks for taking you time中的you改成your

1年前

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