帮我看一下英语作文,语法,通顺性等

帮我看一下英语作文,语法,通顺性等
Being favour of your company ,I would like to introduce my firend to you to apply for a position .His nane is Li MIng ,broned in Qi Dong jiangsu China 1980 8 21 .AS a chinese ,he can speak not only English but also has a graet contrel of English.In dittion ,he can take some Janpanses ang German a little well.Having graduate from university ,he bame a lawyer and got married .He has some experience of there years and all his bosses were satisfied with him .Getting alone well with people ,being firendly to people and working hardly ,were thought hightly of others.I am looking forward to your early reply.I am sure he will be fit for the position.
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君无忧00 幼苗

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As my friend is in avour of your company,he would like to apply to you for a position .His name is Li MIng ,born in Qi Dong Jiangsu,China on August 21st,1980 .Though a chinese national ,he can speak not only Chinese but also has a good command of English.In addition ,he can speak some Janpanse and German After graduating from university ,he became a lawyer and got married .He has there years' work experience and all his bosses are satisfied with him .Getting alone well with people ,being firendly to people and working hard,he is thought highly of by others.I am looking forward to your early reply.I am sure he will be fit for the position he applies to.

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wqh6038 幼苗

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I would like to introduce my friend to you for a position. His name is Li Ming, borned in Qidong at August 21st 1980.As a Chinese, he can not only speak English but also can control it. In addition, h...

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夜郎小文侠_yy 幼苗

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Being favour of your company ,I would like to introduce my firend to you to apply for a position(典型的句子冗杂,语法没有大问题,不过这样的表述太中文了) 。His nane(注意拼写啊——name,这样的错误让改的人很无语啊,楼主浏览过一遍么????至少在WORD文档里面检索一下拼写) is Li ...

1年前

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