短文改错几题,这一句中有两个错误Dose it sound surprised?I had this dream whe

1.改正：Does it sound (surprising)?I had this dream when I was only a child.I (loved) children.
surprised意思是“感到惊讶的”,而surprising意思是“令人感到惊讶的”.句意为“它（指我的梦想）听起来令人感到惊讶吗?”,所以必须改用surprising；
句子I loved children.指的是作者当时有的梦想（had/was）,所以必须用一般过去时.
2.改正：Today is my first day at (the) new school in Australia.
根据句意“今天是我呆在澳大利亚新学校的第一天”,其中的new school in Australia明显为特指,不是泛指,所以必须改用定冠词the.

surprised 改成surprising,surprised用于人的感觉，而surprising则用于强调事情“令人惊讶”
第二句不多说了，错得离谱
today is my first day to study at a new school in Australia

改成：
Dose it sound （surprising）? I （had） had this dream when I was only a child. I love children.
（形容物用surprising，when引导时间状语从句，从句一般过去时，主句过去完成时。）
Today is my first day （in） a new school in A...